Talk:Chess boxing/GA1
GA Review
[edit]- Format references per WP:CITE/ES
- Cut down on external links per WP:EL
- Remove period in image caption per WP:MOS#Captions
- Expand lead to better summarize entire article per WP:LEAD
Gary King (talk) 02:00, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
- "Chess Boxing World Championship, Chessbase News, 5 December 2003" is not using cite web is it? Appears to be citation; use one template or the other but not both.
- "Kirsan Ilyumzhinov As A Chess Boxer!, FIDE" – no accessdate
- Any ref for "If a contestant does not make a move in the chessround, he will be issued a warning by the referee. At the second warning the contestant will be disqualified."?
Gary King (talk) 19:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
- Done. JoshuaZ (talk) 20:09, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
- There are too many small paragraphs in " History" causing it to not flow well. Gary King (talk) 20:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
- Condensed now. Is that better? JoshuaZ (talk) 20:36, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
- Looks better. Passing Gary King (talk) 20:39, 18 July 2008 (UTC)