Talk:Chill Out (album)/to do
- Needs some structural improvement.
Perhaps "Origins" should become Context, with mention of The JAMs' previous sampling work. - Needs a context section. A mention of what "ambient" music is and how this fits into ambient house would not be amiss either. Some material can be lifted from ambient house and possibly The Orb.
- Lead could probably be expanded, and needs possible checking. The word "seminal" may be objected to at FAC: ordinarily, yes, but we can use the word again in the body and then have citations saying this is credited as being the first ambient house album, and the 5th most important album in the history of dance music.
- Need to check everything is referenced (seems to be a bit lacking in number of citations, possible fancruft still lurking) and give it a final copyedit and polish.
- Any more reviews?
- "Composition and recording" needs cites where possible, preferably from music reviewers (a tricky balance to find)
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