Talk:Clean the World
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Proposed Change
[edit] | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
I want to disclose my Conflict of Interest first. I have consulted ( WP:SCOIC ). I am an unpaid, temporary intern for Clean the World. I was not told specifically to include any promotional content. I researched the information for these changes on my own. I would like to make these changes to this article so it is properly sources with credible information.
I would like to edit the typographical error in the second-to-last sentence in the "History" section: change "open" to "opened."
I would like to add as source for sentence 2: [1]
I would like to correctly source citation 9: [2]
I would like sentence 5 changed from "Clean the World recycles soap from more the 1 million hotel rooms daily" to "Since the company started in 2009, it has distributed over 40 million bars of soap in 115 countries" with source: [3]
I would like to correctly source citation 10: [4]
I would like to correctly source citations 13 and 14: [5]
I would like to add a citation for the 5th sentence in the "History" section: [6]
Areichwa4 (talk) 15:01, 7 August 2018 (UTC)Areichwa4
References
- ^ https://www.children.org/learn-more/global-partners-list/clean-the-world
- ^ http://www.who.int/en/news-room/fact-sheets/detail/children-reducing-mortality
- ^ https://www.cnn.com/2017/04/06/health/iyw-clean-the-world-trnd/index.html
- ^ https://cleantheworld.org/about-us/resources/
- ^ https://cleantheworld.org/about-us/resources/
- ^ https://www.hotelbusiness.com/clean-worlds-shawn-seipler-man-mission/
Reply 08-AUG-2018
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Partially implemented
The typographic errors were corrected.- The CNN reference was added to areas of text which were verified by it.
- Other references templates were changed, enabling them to become visible in the text. Previously, they had incorrect templates which caused the references to display as reference needed when in fact the reference was always present.
- Sections of text were summarized, per WP:SS.
- Claims as to the origins of funds were omitted pending third-party references.
- Regards, spintendo 16:49, 8 August 2018 (UTC)