Talk:Coat of arms of Canada/GA1
GA Review
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- The "Blazon" section is one big quote, and should be converted into prose.
- That is how a blazon is written, though... roux
- Ah okay. I'm no expert in this :| Gary King (talk) 17:58, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
- I've converted a bunch of sections into one section with bolded titles. I think it looks a lot better now.
- Hmm, ok... I've rejigged it slightly so that at least there are headers, breaking up the sections a little more obviously and making it more obvious what each paragraph(s) is dealing with. roux
- About.com is not a reliable source, so that one link will have to be replaced.
Done roux
Gary King (talk) 16:50, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Otherwise, I made a few fixes. Looks good, passing. Gary King (talk) 17:59, 21 November 2008 (UTC)