Talk:Come What(ever) May/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:30, 26 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple issues:

"However, the release date for the album was pushed back until August 22, due to the delay Stone Sour released a music video for the track "Reborn" on April 28, 2006, the video featured footage of the band working on the album in the studio." Sentence is a run-on, should be split into a couple.
"The third single from the album "sillyworld" began receiving radio airplay in November 2006." I think Sillyworld's supposed to be capitalized. If lowercase is right then fix where capitalized. Plus, the way it's written (this and the others) makes it sound like that's the name of another album. Adding commas before and after them all should fix that though.

Just a couple small things; I'll put it on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:30, 26 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've made changes to address your concerns. REZTER ^TALK ø 11:41, 26 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good; article passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:46, 26 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]