Done Change United States to USA in both the first sentence and in the infobox, and link the one in the first sentence.
Done Delete the caption of the image in the infobox.
DoneConstruction of the first phase, which included One Commerce Square, the plaza and retail space began in 1985 and was finished in 1987. The second phase of the project, Two Commerce Square did not begin until a lead tenant was secured for the building in 1990. ..... Construction of the first phase, which included One Commerce Square, the plaza and retail space, began in 1985 and was finished in 1987. The second phase of the project, Two Commerce Square, did not begin until a lead tenant was secured for the building in 1990.
DoneConsolidated Rail Corporation (Conrail) ..... do not link the part in the brackets.
DoneNo other office skyscraper would be built in Philadelphia until the Cira Centre in 2005. ..... No other office skyscraper was built in Philadelphia until the Cira Centre in 2005.
Done A sentence should be added to describe the current tenants.
DoneIBM would also serve as the lead tenant for One Commerce Square ..... IBM also served as the lead tenant for One Commerce Square
DoneConstruction began on the first phase of the project on June 10, 1985. The first phase of the project included One Commerce Square, retail and restaurant space, a plaza, and an underground parking garage. ...... reverse the order of these two sentences, first the reader has to find out was phase one is and then when it started.
Done Again de-link (Conrail).
DoneConrail starting seeking proposals ..... Conrail started seeking proposals
DoneNow with a lead tenant, ground broke on the identical tower in July 1990. ..... With a lead tenant, construction of the identical tower was able to start in July 1990.
DoneIn 1996 Maguire-Thomas Partners split leaving Commerce Square owned by Thomas Properties Group Inc...... In 1996, Maguire-Thomas Partners split, leaving the owneship of Commerce Square to Thomas Properties Group Inc alone.
Doneof space was subleased offsetting the cost ..... comma after subleased
link accounting and consulting to their respective articles.
DoneWith the multimedia company's move into the tower, Two Commerce Square's occupancy now stands at 91 percent. ..... With the multimedia company's move into the tower, Two Commerce Square's occupancy reached 91 percent.