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Reviewer: That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
- "which would go on become" go on to become
- "find that her younger brother" Needs clarification as to whose younger brother this refers to.
- "similarities to his own childhood" Childhood experience?
- "and has not been seen since" never to be seen again or somesuch? Seems a little disjointed.
- Lake Okobogee links to a disambig page, should be: East Okoboji Lake
- I think zeroes is more common that zeros and Webster yields Zeroes as well...
- "episode they wrote" Space after the dot between the ref. Needs removal.
- "reestablished" re-est
- "with the episode being describing it as" with the episode being described as?
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): (citations to reliable sources): (OR):
- Perfic'.
- a (references): (citations to reliable sources): (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): (focused):
- Perfic'.
- a (major aspects): (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Perfic'
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Perfic'.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Perfic'
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
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- Pass/Fail:
That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 05:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review this. I have addressed the points you've raised, taking your suggestions in all cases but the fourth, where I instead just removed the disjointed-sounding clause. GRAPPLE X 15:05, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
- Passed. Good show. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 15:39, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks! GRAPPLE X 15:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
- Passed. Good show. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 15:39, 18 July 2011 (UTC)