Talk:Conisbrough Castle/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 19:40, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll take this one, comments to follow in the next few days. Zawed (talk) 19:40, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
Very good work, only minor comments as follows:
Lead
- "mural towers" - wikilink?
11th – 12th centuries
- Please check the dashes are appropriate as per MOS.
13th – 15th centuries
- "The castle continued in Hamelin Plantagenet's family...": suggest "The castle remained in the ownership of Hamelin Plantagenet's family..."
20th – 21st centuries
- Wikilink Ministry of Public Works, English Heritage, Doncaster Council
- "Under this agreement the trust would manage the site, English Heritage maintains the historic fabric...": suggest "Under this agreement the trust would manage the site and English Heritage would maintain the historic fabric..."
- "...settled at around 30,000...": presumably per annum?
Architecture
- "...linked it with the inner ward.": ward?
- No mention here of "mural" towers?
- Wikilink barbican
Other stuff
- References check out OK
- No dup links
- No dab links
- External links are good
- images appear to have appropriate licencing/tags
Will check back in a few days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 02:49, 11 January 2015 (UTC)