Talk:County Route 41 (Onondaga County, New York)/GA1
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Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have the full review up soon. Dana boomer (talk) 18:20, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- In the lead, you say "serving as a connector between the villages named after the aforementioned towns." I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Wouldn't the villages named after the aforementioned towns be the towns themselves? So shouldn't it be "serving as a connector between the two towns"?
- In the Old roads section, you say "which was assigned in the early 1800s, or more specifically, 1800." Why not just say "assigned in 1800"?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Just a couple of comments about prose, so I am putting the article on hold. Drop me a note here on the review page or on my talk page if you have any questions. Dana boomer (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
- Done. :) -Mitch32(UP) 19:07, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the prompt response! Everything looks good, so I'm passing the article. Dana boomer (talk) 19:42, 31 October 2008 (UTC)