Talk:Cristian Montaño/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one up as well, review coming as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Link loan to Loan (sports).
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
League Two is linked twice in the lead.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Early life[edit]

Generally countries are an WP:OVERLINK, so the Colombia and United Kingdom links are probably unnecessary.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

West Ham United[edit]

Link the first mention of loan again.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Oldham Athletic[edit]

"He scored twice in 15 games in the first half of the 2013–14 season", needs a source.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"as the support of friends and supporters", the support of supporters is quite repetitive in the quote caption. Can this be reworded slightly?
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Port Vale[edit]

"better at left back then when", probably worth amending then to than here as it's a minor quote error, per MOS:SIC.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

Avoid shouting in ref titles, per WP:ALLCAPS.
- Done.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
A couple of the West Ham refs appear to have expired, refs 4 and 12 for example, can we recover these?
- Replaced and removed.Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A few minor points, but overall this is a very tidy article. Put on hold for now while these are addressed. Kosack (talk) 06:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me, happy to promote. Kosack (talk) 19:22, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]