Talk:Crystal Defenders/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 13:00, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 13:00, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"the player is the choice of one" Likely "gets the choice" is intended?
"The series reuses tracks from" Tracks might not be the best word choice here, given we had previousily talked about tracks in terms of gameplay levels.
"though only the W1 and W1 chapters were released" Something's wrong here.
"Crystal Defenders Plus February 20, 2013" on seems to be missing
The Notes section could use referencing.

Courcelles (talk) 13:57, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Fixed the grammar/wording problems, and added references to the note that wasn't just the Japanese title(s). --Pres N 16:06, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. 3 non-free images looks like a lot, but I believe it justified in this case. Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 19:48, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]