Talk:DO-IT Scholars Program

I hope that this is good enough. I have worked on this on and off for the past 2 years. -- Azemocram (talk) 18:44, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

Hi- Great work on the Scholar page! I made a few edits, hope this helps. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Repete4545 (talk • contribs) 22:40, 17 August 2010 (UTC)

Hey Azemocram, you need to make those external links into references. Here is a guide that can help: Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners. You also need to find more independent, secondary sources of information on the subject. It needs those to pass the general notability guideline. LogicalFinance33 (talk) 00:52, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, I will look into that. I have been very busy and I was not sure which sources would be good then I became very busy. I have dug up a lot of news sources from many places but I could barely edit the Dutch Baby Pancake article properly (my great grandfather invented the recipe and we have a lot of first party information but it needs to be third party for Wikipedia, there is a museum opening up that should have all the sources needed). Also, I was wondering if it was appropriate to state the inspiration for creating the DO-IT Scholars Program. The inspiration was that Sheryl Burgstahler's husband was diagnosed with cancer and the treatment (which was very harsh back then) left him unable to walk and therefore, used a wheelchair to get around. They were appalled at how poor the service was and how few opportunities there were for people with disabilities and Sheryl founded the DO-IT Scholars program in her husband's honor. Look, I'm rambling again. Sorry -- Azemocram (talk) 19:15, 30 August 2012 (UTC)