Talk:Denmark at the 1952 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"The National Olympic Committee and Sports Confederation of Denmark was formally recognized" - recognised
- Are you sure on these? The "z" form is used by Americans. Courcelles (talk) 15:30, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Denmark was represented in Oslo by a single figure skater," - try In Oslo, Denmark was represented by a single figure skater,

"and had previousily represented" - typo; should be previously
"At the 1948 Winter Olympics he had" - a comma is needed between "Olympics" and "he"
"The men's singles here in Oslo were held over 19–21 February 1952." - The Oslo men's singles were held over 19–21 February 1952.
Consider inserting a wikiilnk of 6.0 system to ordinal placement for those unfamiliar with figure skating.
"and his lowest ranking was fourteenth four of fourteen skaters" - eliminate "four"
Maybe add the "scope=col" field to the data table per MOS:DTT?

Good effort so far. Nothing major popped up during my review. MWright96 (talk) 19:26, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]