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GA Review[edit]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:40, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • as the second single from the parent record → remove "single" here
 Done
  • where several of whom agreed it would succeed → with several agreeing it would succeed
 Done – Yes, this is much better :). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • and number 14 → and at number 14
 Done
  • reached number nineteen → reached number 19
 Done
  • American band Ivy created a cover → You may better use "recorded" here, as "created" sounds not ok
 Done
  • Release year for Guestroom in brackets
 Done

Infobox[edit]

  • The second release date in the infobox may be overfluous
 Done – I forgot to remove it before nominating it ;). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics[edit]

  • with influence from from → one "from" is enough ;)
 Done
  • he worries: "Tell me → : to ,
 Done
  • Release year for She Was Only a Grocer's Daughter in brackets
 Done
  • He wrote: "Dr. Robert → : to ,
 Done

Critical reception[edit]

  • a programmer for Billboard → a programmer from Billboard
 Done
  • that its sound → state "the song" or smth else here as you're introducing a new subtopic
 Done

Chart performance[edit]

  • In the lead, you say the single peaked at number 19 in the UK
 Done
  • second highest peaking single → second-highest peaking single
 Done
  • number 5 → only numbers up to ten are written like this; number five
 Done
  • also peaked at number sixteen → also peaked at number 16
 Done
  • number 7 mark → number seven mark
 Done
  • thirteenth week on Canada's → 13th week on Canada's
 Done
  • numbers sixteen → numbers 16
 Done
  • twenty-five and twenty-three → 25 and 23
 Done

Music video[edit]

  • was released sometime in 1986 → remove "sometime"; 1986 is enough here
 Done
  • Music & Media Conference, that took place → no comma here
 Done

Track listings and formats[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Charts[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Release history[edit]

  • use "rowspan="2" for RCA
 Done

Promotion and use in media[edit]

  • This section should be moved after "Music video"
 Done
  • other is flawless ;)

Ivy version[edit]

Background and development[edit]

  • coos lines like: "I'm like a boy → : to ,
 Done

Infobox[edit]

  • Isn't there any cover for this version?
That's weird, isn't it? Ivy's official catalog lists it as a CD single, but with my educated guess it may have been packaged with a similar cover as seen on "Edge of the Ocean". However, since I can't find any confirmation I'm not gonna add an image :(.

Critical reception[edit]

  • version. He wrote: "Durand's → version, writing, "Durand's
 Done
  • so natural...if you → ... to [...]
 Done

Track listing[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Release history[edit]

  • flawless ;)

Other stuff[edit]

Copy-violation[edit]

Images[edit]

  • Perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links[edit]

References[edit]

  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify some things, but I trust you ;))
  • No dead links! Good job!!

Outcome[edit]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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