Talk:Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 10:27, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Will begin this soon JAGUAR 10:27, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- The lead should mention how many athletes Djibouti had in the games
- "Djibouti's one and only medal prior to these Games was a bronze awarded to Hussein Ahmed Salah" - the source says it was silver
- "Djibouti had two athletes qualify for athletics at this Olympics, one male and one female. Mumin Gala qualified for the 5000m run and Zourah Ali qualified for the 400m run." - needs a citation. And the 'm' abbreviation should read as metre
- "Djibouti's National Olympic Committee (NOC), Comité National Olympique Djiboutien," - is there any need for this? I think it could be removed
- "An NOC can to enter up to three qualified athletes" - A
- "Gala finished the first heat with a time of 13:21.21, finishing 10th in his heat" - repetition of heat
- "Zourah competed in the 400m race" - 400 metre
- Remove the "NA" and "N/R" lines from the key as they're not mentioned in the tables
- No dead links
- Do dab links
All issues addressed, let me know if you need anything else. Kees08 (talk) 14:53, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
I spotted a few minor errors but other than that this article is quite solid and won't require much more to push this to a GA standard. I'll leave this on hold until everything is clarified! JAGUAR 13:20, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! Promoted JAGUAR 15:41, 18 October 2016 (UTC)