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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, thank you for your review! I believe I've covered all of the changes requested. -- /Alex/21 02:22, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good but I would recommend improving the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
- Remove the comma after "revival in 2005".
- Add a comma after "Toby Whithouse".
- Remove the comma after "worked on the show".
- Add a comma after "plots".
All done -- /Alex/21 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Episodes
[edit]- Remove the comma after "aliens' ship".
- Remove the comma after "investigates the puddle".
- "crew were inefficient" → "crew was inefficient"
- "which leads" → "that leads"
- Remove the comma after "Time Lord technology".
- Add a comma after "Chinese".
- Remove the comma after "offers his consent".
- Remove the comma after "another solution".
- Add a comma in between "however the".
- "humanity recall" → "humanity recalls"
- Add a comma after "The Doctor, Bill".
- Add a comma after "The Doctor, Nardole".
- Remove the comma after "fights off the Cybermen".
- Remove the comma after "body back to his TARDIS".
- Remove the comma after "attempts to stop it".
- Add a comma after "displaced, confused".
- The summaries of "The Pilot", "Extremis", "The Eaters of Light", "World Enough and Time", "The Doctor Falls", and "Twice Upon a Time" need to have less than 200 words.
All done -- /Alex/21 02:14, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Casting
[edit]- The second reference after "Radio Times" is missing a website parameter.
- Can the four references after "first episode of the series" be distributed?
- Mark the only source after "every episode" as dead.
- The citation after "episode of Doctor Who" doesn't mention the series.
- Add a comma after "Aleksandar Jovanovic".
- Mark the reference after "Missy in the series" as dead.
All done -- /Alex/21 02:21, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Production
[edit]- Add a comma after "6 March 2017".
- Remove the comma after "12 June 2017".
- Remove the comma after "filming of Class".
All done -- /Alex/21 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Release
[edit]- Add a comma after "On 13 March 2017".
- Add a comma after "Mackie, Moffat".
- Add a comma after "Mackie, Lucas".
- Add a comma after "Capaldi, Mackie".
- "less episodes" → "fewer episodes"
- "United States and Canada" → "the United States, and Canada"
- Add a comma after "16 April in Australia".
All done -- /Alex/21 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]- Every section here looks good.
Soundtrack
[edit]- No issues here.
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