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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Some Dude From North Carolina, thank you for your review! I believe I've covered all of the changes requested. -- /Alex/21 02:22, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good but I would recommend improving the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
  • Remove the comma after "revival in 2005".
  • Add a comma after "Toby Whithouse".
  • Remove the comma after "worked on the show".
  • Add a comma after "plots".

Episodes

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  • Remove the comma after "aliens' ship".
  • Remove the comma after "investigates the puddle".
  • "crew were inefficient" → "crew was inefficient"
  • "which leads" → "that leads"
  • Remove the comma after "Time Lord technology".
  • Add a comma after "Chinese".
  • Remove the comma after "offers his consent".
  • Remove the comma after "another solution".
  • Add a comma in between "however the".
  • "humanity recall" → "humanity recalls"
  • Add a comma after "The Doctor, Bill".
  • Add a comma after "The Doctor, Nardole".
  • Remove the comma after "fights off the Cybermen".
  • Remove the comma after "body back to his TARDIS".
  • Remove the comma after "attempts to stop it".
  • Add a comma after "displaced, confused".
  • The summaries of "The Pilot", "Extremis", "The Eaters of Light", "World Enough and Time", "The Doctor Falls", and "Twice Upon a Time" need to have less than 200 words.

Casting

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  • The second reference after "Radio Times" is missing a website parameter.
  • Can the four references after "first episode of the series" be distributed?
  • Mark the only source after "every episode" as dead.
  • The citation after "episode of Doctor Who" doesn't mention the series.
  • Add a comma after "Aleksandar Jovanovic".
  • Mark the reference after "Missy in the series" as dead.

Production

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Release

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  • Add a comma after "On 13 March 2017".
  • Add a comma after "Mackie, Moffat".
  • Add a comma after "Mackie, Lucas".
  • Add a comma after "Capaldi, Mackie".
  • "less episodes" → "fewer episodes"
  • "United States and Canada" → "the United States, and Canada"
  • Add a comma after "16 April in Australia".

Reception

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  • Every section here looks good.

Soundtrack

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  • No issues here.

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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