Talk:Don't Kill It/GA1
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Reviewer: Slightlymad (talk · contribs) 11:09, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
Grabbing this for a review. SLIGHTLYmad 11:09, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
- Infobox: Under Release date, specify the exact venues during the August 27 and September 26 premieres. The runtime is also unsourced; just cite the BBFC as a reference since it's considered reliable by MOS:FILM
- Plot: consider expanding this into a real plot summary; this requires watching the movie. Make sure it comports with WP:FILMPLOT.
- Development:The scripted film took place in Alaska, What do you mean by "scripted film"? I'm confused.
- Filming: Apparently, the city and public were very interested in the movie's production and the presence of Dolph Lundgren within their community. "Apparently" is WP:EDITORIALIZING
- Release: On March 3, 2017, the film was released in "select theaters" and made available through video on demand. What does quoting "select theaters" imply? I feel like this is WP:SCAREQUOTES. I would rephrased that clause into, "On March 3, 2017, the film had a limited theatrical release..."
- Critical reception: According to him, Don't Kill It "plays like a B-movie version of Fallen. Please provide a link for Fallen, and make sure it is the same stuff the reviewer was talking about.
- Home media: Expand this by adding reviews of the DVD/Blu-ray versions.
- Avoid use of contractions per MOS:N'T. I managed to fix some of them in the prose but I'm leaving the others for you to fix. If there are contractions in direct quotes, just leave them alone.
- Kindly double-check if the prose observes proper logical quotation.
Metal121, I'm giving you until September 1 to fix these concerns, even though such a long time won't be necessary. If these are not addressed on or before the prescribed date, I will have to fail this outright. SLIGHTLYmad 12:35, 24 August 2017 (UTC)