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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:06, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • Added Steelers, Eagles, Scranton basketball, Baseball players from Delaware, Basketball players from Delaware, and American Basketball League (1925–1955) players cats
  • Changed receiver cat to ends
  • PFA and PFR conflict on his death place
    • Changed to say he just died in Delaware.
  • "being in addition to a two-way starting end the team's placekicker" Comma after end
    • Added.
  • I got rid of the asterick for Steelers because he was released on Sep 9 and the Steelers' first game was Sep 8
  • "season as the Clippers suspended" change to they suspended operations due to WW2. Also they were only an independent in 1942 because of WW2 as well. At the Wilmington Clippers article, it says they returned to the AA in 1946.
  • "He coached the semi-professional Wilmington Arrows" Perhaps change to head coach and also in the infobox
    • Done.
  • "win over the Card-Pitt" Remove "the"?
    • Removed.
  • "We played that game [won by the Rams " link Rams
    • Linked,
  • Add head coach to the Clippers in the infobox
    • Added,

That's all I think. Excellent work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:31, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]