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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk · contribs) 01:18, 10 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Pre review commments

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Thanks for taking the time to review it Saulo! :)--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 20:58, 11 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
So sorry it's taking me so long! I'll put the review up this weekend. :) - Saulo Talk to Me 01:08, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

First look through

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Infobox

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  • The release date there is April 8, 2008, when the first date in the release history is April 4, 2008.

Lead

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  • Four singles were commission -> Four singles were commissioned
  • Avoid repeating "Carey" too much in the last paragraph. You've used it three times in a row.

Background and recording

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  • Carey spoke of her sentiments on the album -> Carey spoke of her sentiments on the album:

Critical reception

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  • 'It received a 64/100'. The "Professional ratings" box and source says 63/100.
  • Writing fir Entertainment Weekly -> Writing for Entertainment Weekly
  • Try to replace 'Carey' with 'the singer' and 'her' when appropriate. You repeated 'Carey' a lot.

Comments

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Saulo. It's been nearly two months. Please just post the full review so I can address it in an organized fashion.--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 01:32, 6 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]