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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:41, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:41, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions[edit]

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Suggest expanding the lead paragraphs, perhaps add in info about his wife and children, and about his civic roles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • He served as a Roman consul prior to his accession. suggest:
    He served as a Roman consul three times prior to his accession.
  • he probably taught Marcus the basics of that language.[35] (He is said to have taught Marcus literature.[36]) suggest:
    he probably taught Marcus the basics of that language, as he is said to have taught Marcus literature.
  • For his dutiful behavior, Antoninus was asked to accept the name "Pius" should specify who asked him to. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Edward Champlin reckons him a senator. suggest:
    Edward Champlin suggests he may have been a senator.
  • @Векочел: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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