Talk:Earth Peoples Park
Page editing
[edit]Can someone assist me with editing this article?
- Maybe - it is one big unreferenced wall of text at the moment. How do you need help? Astronaut (talk) 21:15, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
This page has been nominated for a neutrality check:
- As the originator of this page, it was admittedly difficult to author this, without inputting both personal knowledge and personal expierences into the text, particularily since so much of the story of EPP is either word-of-mouth, or poorly documented in public records. While there are some refernces to EPP and events in court records and various newspaper accounts, much of the information about EPP is held by the state and federal governments, and is not easily available for verification purposes. 71.37.5.41 (talk) 19:55, 25 May 2011 (UTC)jay.
Resurrection of Earth Peoples Park
[edit]I have problems with the "Resurrection of Earth Peoples Park" edit:
- The section does not fit well into the structure of the current article. 95% of the page is about another site in Vermont, but the "resurrection" part (Oregon) is put in the article lead. It should possibly be a separate section after the "Earth Peoples Park land in Del Norte County California" section.
- The addition is completely unsourced, and both refers to a person "Morning Spring Rain", and has been edited by User:Morning Spring Rain. There appears to be a conflict of interest here.
- The text appears to be both vague and promotional - "The church has liberated hundreds of acres in southern Oregon in the fight to save our Rivers,Forests,and Wildlife."