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Reviewer: FREYWA 02:24, 4 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first review...I have no idea of what to expect. But still, you can leave comments and I will address them. Check out my peer review as well. Good luck, editors. FREYWA 02:24, 4 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


Ready to review.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
     Done
    You have some specifics in mind? Nergaal (talk) 02:53, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
     Done
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    90 sources. Real good.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    One per paragraph - even better then the rule of thumb (one per section).
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Per the guidelines, this has everything.
    B. Focused:
    Again, some specifics would be helpful. Nergaal (talk) 02:53, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    The 4th criterion is equivalent to not looking like anything. And this article does.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    Obviously.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    With something dealing with US confidential, there is no question on the pictures.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Specifically, for section 1A, in the section on organomettalic compounds it says, "So experiments, have been performed..." and the comma there is something I want you to fix. For section 3B the section on the synthesis in nuclear explosions is a wall and looks intimidating. FREYWA 08:09, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Worked a bit on both. Nergaal (talk) 17:02, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hold it - where is the a parameter for EsOCl (look at Chemical compounds → Halides → the last paragraph)? The prose is really good. Remove that "a = " and I will list einsteinium as a good article soon. I have to remove the a parameter myself. Then it will be a good article. FREYWA 08:13, 8 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]