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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 15:33, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Why was the tour controversial? Maybe it was just poorly received?
- "last-ever" - overmphasized, just "last"
- "It is considered to be Harrison's soul album, " - Confusing. Reword it.
Done But I think, I may have made it more confusing(?) yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. How about "Featuring elements of soul music and demonstrating... , the album was something..."--GoPTCN 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
- Sounds good. Added. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
- "hit single in the song "You"," - in the song? Maybe "it produced the moderate hit single, "You"". Also how can it be both moderate and a hit single?
- Would "it produced the moderately hit single" work? yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- Why does Forum links to a city?
Done "Forum shows, in Los Angeles". yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- "(from Horn)" - Horn is a band?
Done Jim Horn. Session musician. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- The article has too many overemphasized language, eg "last-ever", can be just last
Done Fixed. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall: Just a few small issues.--GoPTCN 18:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass Great article! :)--GoPTCN 09:59, 21 July 2012 (UTC)