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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
  • "The argument" maybe "This argument"?
  • "He also identifies...war-prone nations" Shouldn't the clause after the comma provide a contrast with the first clause here?
    • It doesn't use "but", "however", "although", etc
  • "Madison used a similar empiricist argument as Hamilton" maybe better as "Madison used an empiricist argument similar to Hamilton's"
  • Plot summary seems accurate from a reading of the original document.
  • Images are properly licensed and used.
  • References are reliable and properly formatted.
  • Spot-checks:
    • "Federalist Essays in Historic Newspapers". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
    • Millican, Edward (2014). One United People: The Federalist Papers and the National Idea. University Press of Kentucky. pp. 79–80. Verifies all claims made.
    • "Federalist Papers: Primary Documents in American History". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
  • That's all I have.

AryKun, all changes made except the one noted above. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 17:29, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]