Talk:Feelings (Zonke song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will do this tomorrow JAGUAR 20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

""Feelings" is a jazz song that is accompanied by a combination of African drums and beats" - link Rhythm in Sub-Saharan Africa
"She remarked that it is important for her to handle the production on her music" - of her music?
"unlike the majority of Zonke's catalog" - catalogue (South African spelling)
Channel O is linked twice in the beginning of the Reception section. On the second instance it is italicised, so does it need to be italicised or not?
"However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane instead won the award" - However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane won the award instead,
"During the singer's own Give and Take Live Tour" - 'the singer' seems redundant here, I'd just replace it with "her"
No dead links
No dab links

This is a neat and compact article. I couldn't find anything wrong with the sources and it the prose is well written, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR 16:57, 21 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: Thanks so much for your review! I have made all the changes you suggested above! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 21:29, 21 October 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Thanks! Promoted.

JAGUAR 10:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]