Talk:Fort Tigné/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:36, 1 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:36, 1 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Despite this, only 15 of the 28 guns Despite what?
  • Numerous duplicate links.
  • A traverse, with courtyards What's a traverse?
  • repetitious use of "diamond shaped structure" which actually needs a hyphen between diamond and shaped.
  • Explain and link BL gun
  • Can you get a map of the fort itself?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:39, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • I changed the text about the 15/28 guns, replaced "traverse" with "blockhouse" (as per this link), added hyphens between diamond-shaped, and linked BL gun. I could crop Fort Tigné from this map, do you think it would be better? Xwejnusgozo (talk) 15:43, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • That could work, although it's not as detailed as I'd prefer. Can you get a map of how it looks now? Or even a google maps screenshot, if those aren't copyrighted?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:51, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Sturmvogel 66: I created the following maps showing the fort as it is today (including the British modifications). Which one would be best? Xwejnusgozo (talk) 15:24, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Map with annotations or without

The one with the key, if you please. It's always best to have names applied to all the various features.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:00, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]