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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:47, 15 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
  • I've done a copyedit, feel free to point out any changes you disagree with.
  • The conservation information is crammed into a single sentence in distribution; this should be expanded into its own section, especially since the IUCN mentions a lot about the effect of the pet trade on the species.
Will get to. LittleJerry (talk) 19:15, 15 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
LittleJerry, any update? AryKun (talk) 13:21, 19 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, I'll get to this this weekend. LittleJerry (talk) 13:24, 19 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
AryKun, done. LittleJerry (talk) 21:13, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've done another copyedit, mostly fixing typos and italics.
  • The cladogram doesn't mentions the scientific name of the species or the clade that it is representing; it's of limited use without this information.
  • "may weigh" → "weighs"
  • "may have black belly" → Is the color of the belly variable? If not, it should be just "males have a black belly"
  • "that may merge" → See above.
  • "Males may move around more" → "Males move around more" since you give statistics that suggest that males move around more
  • "Male lizards may assert their boundaries" → See above, presumably a frill display is the most common way of asserting territoriality.
  • Ref numbers refer to this version. Refs checked according to ref number generated by random number generator
  • Ref 12 : Verifies all claims made.
  • Ref 2 : Verifies all claims made
  • Ref 10 : Verifies cladogram
  • Ref 38 : Verifies all claims made.
  • Ref 30 : Verifies all claims made.
  • Rest of references are properly formatted and are to reliable sources, and seem to be properly used.
  • Article is well illustrated and uses properly licensed images.
  • Earwig is clear. AryKun (talk) 15:32, 21 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed all. I can't get for context for the cladogram since it would increase vastly in size. See this LittleJerry (talk) 20:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]