Talk:Game 39/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 11:52, 14 May 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Don't force image sizes (fixed)
  • There are no forced image sizes -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:55, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
    • I fixed those, thus the "(fixed)" Arsenikk ^(talk) 21:32, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
• The reactions make up a large part of the article, but it is not particularly discussed in the lead (which is slightly short).
  • Lead has been expanded -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:21, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
• FIFA is called the "International Federation of Association Football" in English. Place the full name first, then the abbreviation, even if the article is called by the abbreviated name.
  • Done -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:08, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• The external link runs to some odd mobile page
  • Fixed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• "National game" is a disambig
  • Fixed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• "England's bid to host the 2018 World Cup" should link to "England 2018 FIFA World Cup bid", not the general bid article.
  • Done -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:49, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• Ref 24 is a dead link.
  • Unfortunately couldn't find that archived or anywhere else on the web, so had to remove the point it referenced. As it was only one journo's opinion on the subject, I don't think it's a huge loss..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• There is a mix of regular and ISO dates in the references.
  • Sorted -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:08, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
• Both the see also links are included in the prose, so don't repeat them in the see also section.
  • Done -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:55, 16 May 2011 (UTC)

Overall well-written and encyclopedic, with only some minor issues to look into. Placing on hold for the mean-time Arsenikk ^(talk) 11:52, 14 May 2011 (UTC)

Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk ^(talk) 21:32, 19 May 2011 (UTC)