Talk:German destroyer Z12 Erich Giese/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk · contribs) 11:18, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Again I will base my review on Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz. MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:18, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hildebrand, Hans H.; Röhr, Albert; Steinmetz, Hans-Otto (1993). Die Deutschen Kriegsschiffe. Vol. 3. Ratingen: Mundus Verlag. ASIN B003VHSRKE.

launched on 12 March 1936, HRS p. 65 dates this 12 March 1937. Please check
- Good catch.
after launch assigned to the 8. Zerstörrer-Division as part of the 4. Zerstörrer-Flottille under the command of FK Brocksien
- Added, but need a page #
  - p. 65.
HRS p. 67. claims that 87 Germans were killed and 9 were taken POW please verify numbers don't match
- Added with a note. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Footnotes and References: Inconsistent spelling of Groener/Gröner and Hervieux is not used
- All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:49, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]