Talk:Gliese 581c/GA2
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Reviewer: Davidbuddy9 Talk 04:06, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
Pass
- The lead paragraph is a nice read and it definitely seems to be polished.
- The sub-section Mass (under Physical characteristics) says clarification needed. But I don't see how this could be clarified more the sentence makes sense and is understandable already. So remove the clarification needed tag.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
- Under Liquid Water, add that citation from MOST used in the second last paragraph in Radius That justifies no transits.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- Recent edits have been mostly constructive so far of all edits made in 2016 to this article only 1 edit has been flagged as vandalism or testing but the edit itself didn't seem like vandalism altough the space between 581 and c should be there.:
- Recent edits have been mostly constructive so far of all edits made in 2016 to this article only 1 edit has been flagged as vandalism or testing but the edit itself didn't seem like vandalism altough the space between 581 and c should be there.:
- It is illustrated by two images, all of which are WP:AIAO compliant.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass, polished lead, one citation that needs to be carried over and one tag needs to be removed.
- Pass/Fail:
- I have made all the fixes needed in this edit. Davidbuddy9 Talk 04:09, 3 April 2016 (UTC)