Talk:Guyana at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

  • Michael Anthony and Georgetown link to disambiguation pages; have them link to the right ones.
  • "It is adjacent to Venezuela, to Brazil, and to Suriname," to Venezuela, Brazil, and Suriname
  • "and has participated at every" and have
  • "In all of its history, only the only case in" history, the only
  • "Born in Linden and trained in Louisiana State University in Baton Rouge," the use of trained sounds a bit iffy here, but I'm not sure what to replace it with.
    • Let me know what you think of the rewording. --Starstriker7(Talk) 05:31, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:17, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

I've addressed all the comments. Let me know if anything comes up. Thanks for reviewing the article! :) --Starstriker7(Talk) 05:31, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
Looks good, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:21, 11 July 2012 (UTC)