Talk:HMS Ark Royal (1914)/GA1

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:19, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

• There's one dab link. Please fix.
  • Done
• World War I subsection, 5th graph: there's a citation needed template. Please fix.
  • Done
• "The ship then became a seaplane training ship again, hosting 763 Squadron aboard from 20 April 1942 to 13 February 1944.[25] Pegasus then became a barracks ship until May 1946 and was then listed for disposal in June." - any idea where the ship went in this time or where it was moored?
  • No info in any of my sources.
• I'm surprised there isn't more discussion about the lessons the Royal Navy took from this ship and applied to its subsequent carrier fleet. What relevance did this ship have on the subsequent classes?
  • From what I can tell, very little because they were all conversions of existing ships and the Admiralty would have to pay to have them reconverted back so they weren't heavily modified.

Once again, just a few suggestions. —Ed!^(talk) 03:41, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:03, 2 December 2011 (UTC)