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GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 00:28, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    prose: (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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1. undergo a great repair. Suggest - undergo a repair.

2. Under Pigot Hermione. Suggest - Under Pigot, Hermione

3. cutlasses - Suggest - a link for this.

4. probably while he was still alive. Suggest - you remove this.

5. just 18. Suggest - just 18 men.

6. Suggest for all of the money you add a note saying how much it would be in today's money according to inflation.

7. All of the references need to be in alphabetical order.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 15:22, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Note on "In today's terms"

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Might I suggest for point 6, that you use the wikicode: £16,100 as of 2024.[1]
  • That's what I did.

4. Pope's book the Black Ship writes that "he was still alive" and cites witnesses and defendents in the later trials as evidence for this. (I think)

  • I deleted it - I think its better for WP:Summary to leave it out plus the facts are a little fuzzy here. Might be worthy of a note; I'll think about it.

Thanks,Corneredmouse (talk) 16:09, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ UK Retail Price Index inflation figures are based on data from Clark, Gregory (2017). "The Annual RPI and Average Earnings for Britain, 1209 to Present (New Series)". MeasuringWorth. Retrieved May 7, 2024.