To be honest I have struggled to find any fault with this one but here goes
The image in the inf box has the ships name in it, I believe it does not affect GA but may come up at FAC so you might want to change it or get it cropped.
We'll have to see.
The image in the Design and description section is labelled as Repulse as she was in 1919 is that a typo ? or could be change into Renown class battleship in 1919
In the same section One fighter and a reconnaissance aircraft were carried if known the types of aircraft could be added.
If I only knew for sure.
Not the end of the world but the following section First World War is very small. Obviousley because of when she was comnpleted but it may imporve they layout to merge it into the following section as a 1916–1939 section or a section up to 1926 when she was being reconstructed