Talk:HMS Seraph (1918)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 21:40, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
- " On 29 June 1919, Seraph supported the Russian cruiser Kagul in the attack on Koktebel." - it's not clear if Seraph is just in a backup role, or if she's actively laying down support fire here
That's the only concern I have here, good work. Hog Farm Talk 15:33, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: Thank you. You are very kind. That is a good spot; I have clarified the statement. At the same time, I found some interesting references in The Times to service in Turkey so I have added those too. I think they enhance the article too. simongraham (talk) 17:10, 8 July 2022 (UTC)