Talk:H-class battleship proposals/GA1
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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk) 10:08, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]This article easily meets the GA criteria - great work. My suggestions for further improvements are:
- The lead should (briefly) identify what Plan Z was
- "The ship's radius of action was to be at least equal that of the Deutschland-class cruisers" - it would be best to specify what that was in this article to save people from having to follow the link
- Assessments by historians on the merits of the various designs would probably be worth including
- It would be interesting to discuss the ships' planned aviation capabilities, as these seem unusually large
Assessment against the GA criteria
[edit]GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Nick-D (talk) 10:08, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing the article. I'll probably hold off on making the suggested improvements (all of which are excellent, btw) until I'm ready to take the article to ACR/FAC, but I didn't want you to think I missed the review page. Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 03:14, 13 April 2011 (UTC)