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GA Review

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  • Please split the lead into 2/3 paragraphs as per most album GA/FAs.
  • I'm not sure if [1] is a reliable source?
  • "which Van Winkle described" --> "which he described"?
  • Some Professional reviews dudes in infobox need italics (eg. NY Times).
  • "An example of the sound of Hard to Swallow." - this needs more info... describe what it sounds like, what reception of it was, how it relates to the article text...
  • "In the early stages of the album's development, Hard to Swallow was initially" - redundancies
  • "Van Winkle stated of working with Ross Robinson, "The vibe was totally so cool. We had the album finished in a month and a half because we kept the vibe."" - what's that got to do with the rest of this paragraph?
  • Reception section needs plenty of expansion.

And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (:O) 02:38, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • "who had worked with bands such as Deftones, Korn, and Sepultura." why is this so important to warrant inclusion in the lead? Can we get a slightly bigger (since 300 x 300 is the max allowed) album cover without the parental advisory label? indopug (talk) 12:54, 22 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]