Talk:Harvard Extension School/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:05, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 22:05, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
This a very well-worded article! I have just a few concerns that I have listed below:
Lead[edit]
- Please put Ref #6 at the end of the sentence as it looks kind of awkward where it is currently placed
- Done.
History[edit]
- You list "early faculty", but many of them are in red links; why should they be listed when they aren't necessarily notable, considering they don't have Wikipedia articles?
- I removed all the redlinks.
- Who described the Extension classes as "surprisingly affordable"?
- It was Fodor's, but I am not sure why this one clause in the whole article was singled out. Even the very next clause is cited by not attributed in text.
Deans[edit]
- There are no sources at all for this section
- Done.
Academics[edit]
Distance education[edit]
- The 'Today' section starts with "As of 2014..."; does this still apply to 2016, the current year? If so, current-ize this section so it is up-to-date
- I'm not sure, so I changed the heading from "Today" to "Modern"
Academic requirements[edit]
- I would add "strict" before "GPA requirements."
- Done.
Alumni[edit]
- The notes in parentheses look out of place to me; there must be some way that you could explain this in the section itself instead of creating footnotes, yes?
- This screwed with the placement of the references a little, but I think I made it work.
Notable alumni[edit]
- The last sentence in this section's third paragraph doesn't make sense to me
- I broke it up. Hope this clarifies things.
End of GA Review:[edit]
Like I said, a very strong article, but I do have a few concerns. Let me know once you've finished with this, I shall put it on hold for seven days. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 16:46, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
@BrianCUA: You there? Almost a week has passed. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:09, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- Carbrera, Sainsf, BrianCUA rarely edits on weekends. It would be nice if you could give him at least another day or two to respond. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:20, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: Thanks, I would request Carbrera to wait for three days. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:23, 24 April 2016 (UTC)