Talk:Hasta la Raíz (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- An alt needs to be provided for the cover image
- Stay consistent with your format of the flatlists
- Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"
Lead
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
- Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Expand this paragraph
Background
[edit]- The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
- Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
- Change 'seven' to 'six' years
Writing and recording
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- Link 'Mexico'
- The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses
Paragraph 2
[edit]- The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
- Add an author to the Billboard source if available
Critical and commercial reception
[edit]- Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception
Paragraph 1
[edit]- Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
- Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
- Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)
Music video
[edit]- Try adding a photo of the music video
- Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well
Track listing
[edit]- Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Remove the ';' from each credit
- Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens
References
[edit]- [6] - Link iTunes store
- [8] - Link Discogs
- [12] - Link Billboard
- [13] - Use a proper n dash
- [13] - Link Spotify
- [14] - Remove one of the 'Coffee and Saturday' inclusions
- [16] - Use a proper n dash
- [19] - Use a proper n dash
- [20] - Use a proper n dash
- [21] - Use a proper n dash
- [22] - Use a proper n dash
- [27] - Link Sony Music
End of GA Review:
[edit]Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).