Talk:Homesick (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

It will be exciting to review one of your articles again! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

It says it's the seventh single on the lead, but the eighth on the Dua Lipa album. Which one is it?

Thats my mistake, thanks for checking that. The song "New Love" was being discussed as a promotional single or single and I forgot to update it once the discussion was closed. Its the eighth. LOVI 33 15:03, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"The song was released by Warner Bros. Records as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → The song was released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"

Not done, Digital single ≠ digital download/streaming, it was released after the release of its parent album. LOVI 33 15:03, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"it was serviced to" → "it was sent to"
"with lyrics discussing being away from loved ones." → "with its lyrics addressing being away from loved ones."
"but many also feeling as though it was forced." → "but also feeling it was forced."

Done

Writing and production[edit]

"everything and wanting" → "everything, and wanting"
"and she found it" → "and found it"
"They began recording everything, humming and making up melodies." → "They began recording the song, humming and making up melodies."
"as she though it" → "as she thought it"

Done

Music and lyrics[edit]

Looks good!

Release and promotion[edit]

"The song was later released as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → "The song was later released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"

Not done, per above. LOVI 33 15:05, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

"labelled the song "delicate"" → "labelled the song as "delicate""
"Homesick" "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." → "Homesick" as a "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." track."

Done

Track listings[edit]

Looks good!

Credits and personnel[edit]

Looks all good!

Charts[edit]

Looks good!

Certifications[edit]

Looks good!

Release history[edit]

Looks good!

References[edit]

[1] looks great at 11.5%

Final comments and verdict[edit]

I am putting this On hold until the issues are fixed. Great job on this article! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:47, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Ultimate Boss, thanks for reviewing this article! I have addressed all your comments above, is there anything else I can do? LOVI 33 15:10, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Everything looks great! I am going to ✓ Pass this! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:26, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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