Talk:Honiara/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Pleasant1623 (talk · contribs) 13:42, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Will post comments tomorrow. Regards, ----Plea$ant 1623 13:42, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, posting comments:
Lead
  • "Conditions became so bad in Honiara that in July 2003 Australian military and police units moved into the country to restore order" --> "Conditions became so bad in Honiara that in July 2003 the Australian military and police units moved into the country to restore order."
  • Done
  • "... destroying part of Chinatown and displacing more than 1,000 Chinese residents" --> "destroying a part of Chinatown and making more than 1,000 Chinese residents homeless"
  • Done
  • "The commercial heart of Honiara was virtually reduced to rubble and ashes, devastating the town. As a result tourism in the city and islands has been severely affected." --> "The town eventually got devastated due to the riots and also severely affected the tourism in the city and the islands."
  • Done
Modern development
  • Link leprosy
  • Linked
Economy
  • "Honiara has a harbour from which ferries depart to the various other parts of the Solomon Islands." - Citation needed
  • Slightly changed the sentence and fixed a reference
Schools
  • "In 1979, following independence in 1978 from British rule" --> "In 1979, following independence in 1978 from the British rule"
  • Done
  • "Since 2007, the management has started an ambitious programme of enhancing the building and other infrastructure facilities of the school..." --> "Since 2007, the management has started a programme of enhancing the building and other infrastructure facilities of the school..."
  • Done
Hotels and restaurants
  • "... which replaced the former hotel which was gutted during the 2006 riots". Which hotel? The King Solomon Hotel?
  • Done
Culture
  • "... and are copied from the 'You Got Served', 'Step Up 1 and 2' and 'Stomp the Yard'". You're talking about the movies, right? If yes, then please link all three.
  • Done
  • Weird, in one sentence harbor is written in British and in another one American. Please change any one of them for the sake of uniformity.
  • Done

When these comments are addressed, I will pass the article. Regards, ----Plea$ant 1623 15:18, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

  • Plea$ant 1623, thanks for the review. Dr. Blofeld and myself have collaborated on most articles including this one. Hope all issues raised by you are addressed.--Nvvchar. 18:17, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Final analysis[edit]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Good job, passing the article. Thanks, ----Plea$ant 1623 14:18, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review!♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:30, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, Pleasant1623.--Nvvchar. 17:48, 17 August 2013 (UTC)