Talk:Hurricane Ismael (1983)/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:32, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 15:32, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "Continuing to intensity," to intensify
- "a 20-year old woman was swept away when off rocks" a bit confusing, reword
That's all I found, easy to fix, article on hold. Wizardman 02:44, 18 June 2013 (UTC)