Talk:I Admit (Sanda song)/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:08, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "as a CD single in 2004 by the Romanian Television (TVR)." - just having by Romanian Television (TVR). is the correct term to refer to it in English

Background and composition

• "A CD single (music) of "I Admit" was released in Romania in 2004 by the Romanian Television (TVR) in Romania," - reword this section of sentence to A CD single of "I Admit" was released in Romania in 2004 by Romanian Television (TVR),

In Istanbul

• "According to the then-Eurovision rules, selected countries, except the host country" - nation to avoid reptition
• "As automatically qualified for the final due to Romania's top 11 placement the previous year," - As she
• "During her show, the singer" - she so that we don't have two mentions of the word singer in the sentence this is part of
• "writing for Augsburger Allgemeine criticized Sanda's" - criticised

Management

• "Published by the Romanian Television (TVR)" - just Romanian Television will suffice

Not too much for you to do. Just the minor quibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 12:30, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: Hi there and thank you for reviewing another one of my short Eurovision articles. I think I have adressed all your queries above. Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:49, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Yes, you have addressed all my queries. Am now happy to promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:04, 27 April 2018 (UTC)