Talk:Ice famine
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Written like a middle school essay
[edit]This article needs work. It reads like a middle school essay and not an informative article about a topic. Jwink3101 (talk) 16:34, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
I agree with this thought, and made this account to make the same comment. I am happy to rewrite it in a more formal tone using the same content, however I am unsure how to proceed with this. Unuseddote (talk) 11:15, 16 June 2021 (UTC)