Talk:Interstate 29 in Iowa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk) 17:06, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I am holding the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• The lead seems a bit short --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Lengthened a bit. –Fredddie™ 22:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
• "US 20 Bus. traffic is forced onto the interstate for 1/2 miles (0.80 km) before it exits via the volleyball interchange which represents the national northern end of U.S. Route 77." - forced on seems like poor wording. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Changed forced to directed. –Fredddie™
• First three sentences in History read kind of choppy. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Removed a sentence and redid the paragraph structure, hopefully that helps. –Fredddie™
• No need to link interstate highway again in History. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. –Fredddie™
• Bottom of RJL needs {{Jctbtm}}. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. –Fredddie™
• Overlinking in references. Only need to link Iowa DOT once. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. –Fredddie™
• File:I-29 (IA) map.svg needs a GIS / outline source. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Not my work, but added. –Fredddie™
• The 85 map is a dead link --Admrboltz (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • De-linked. –Fredddie™

I have addressed your concerns. –Fredddie™ 22:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Passing. --Admrboltz (talk)