Talk:J. Walter Thompson/Archives/2014

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Overview issues

The Overview section appears [1] to be an official biography and seriously lacking in NPOV. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.16.13.9 (talk) 17:37, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

  • Sophruhig Vita@comcast.net (talk · contribs) - edited the overview section to read with neutral POV, as pointed out it read as promotional copy. Also edited for neutral POV in company history, and omitted some phrases that read like publicity without citation. Omitted bulleted items in "Pop Culture" section that did not have citations, and changed header of "Famous Campaigns" to "Notable Campaigns"

agency network?

Before telling us that this is one of the biggest "agency networks", could someone tell the lay reader what an "agency network" is? A bit of searching suggests a network of insurance agencies or of advertising agencies could be called that. And while we're at it, the term "marketing communications brand" is not used every day by people who don't work in that field. 2601:2:4D00:27B:EC95:D98E:C834:5818 (talk) 20:40, 29 October 2014 (UTC)

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