Talk:Javier López (baseball)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

Hello again. I can take up this GA review. Reflinks is a thumbs up and so is Checklinks. In addition, I'm liking what I see. @Sanfranciscogiants17:, I look forward to working with you again. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 19:57, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: - Hi, I haven't heard a reply in a week. Do you still want me to review this article? Once you confirm this, I can begin my section-by-section. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 03:33, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: - For starters, there is a lot in the personal life section, such as the college stuff that are better fitted in the Early Life section, which needs some desperate attention. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 22:32, 16 February 2014 (UTC)

@Sportsguy17: - Of course I want you to review this; I just didn't realize you wanted confirmation. By the way, after this, would you mind reviewing Denny Bautista if you have time? :) Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 00:41, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: - My apologies for the miscommunication. I have had some nominations whom I've had to quick fail since the nominator did not respond to my GAR feedback and I just want to make sure that my Barry Zito buddy (Which BTW, was one of my favorite articles to review ) was able to follow through. In terms of Denny Bautista, I'd love to review that article after this. So for this article, lets start off with some article organization stuff. First thing is, the stuff about college in the Personal Life section should be moved to the second paragraph of the Early Life section. The seasons sections look good at first glance, but I'll be more thoroughly analyzing it later. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 00:51, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Looks like you've made the necessary fixes, so I am passing this article. Nice job! Sportsguy17 (T • C) 23:48, 20 February 2014 (UTC)