Talk:Jeepers Creepers (2001 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lirim.Z (talk · contribs) 10:16, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this later today — Lirim | Talk 10:16, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

Picture in the infobox needs an alt text (WP:MOSALT)

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:43, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fair use rationale is good
Infobox looks good

Plot, cast

No issues

Production

Development and writing

Picture needs alt

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:46, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I would change the order of the refs, so it's [14][16]

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:46, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-production

Well written, but the entire section is based on one single source, would it be possible to add a second or third one?

That's about all I could find for those topics. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:41, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Casting

Hollywood.com should be in italics

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:01, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Filming and design

Picture needs alt

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:17, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Music

Cover needs alt

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:20, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AllMusic's genres should be avoided (WP:A/S; WP:ALLMUSIC), a single AllMusic source doesn't really cut it

Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:20, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox is good
Please use Template:Non-free use rationale album cover for the album cover

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:22, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

Theatrical

No issues

Home Media

Behind the Peepers - The Making of Jeepers Creepers -> – en-dash

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:23, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Box office

"Labor Day opening weekend four-day gross previously held by the 2006 film The Crow: City of Angels ($9.8 million)." -> 1996

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:29, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"By the end of its run in the United States and Canada, the film grossed $37.9 million" -> By the end of its run in/on Month/Year in the United States...

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:29, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

"compared it positively to Scream." -> add (1996) after Scream

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:30, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"acting work" is a weird term, "acting" would be better

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:30, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Accolades

No issues

Sequels

No issues

References

It's lastname, firstname for all refs

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:39, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 20: website=Hollywood.com

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:06, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 29: No need for the out, Shout quickly/Scream quickly is a better translation

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:12, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 33, 36, 37, 43, 46: en-dashes (–)

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:15, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 40, 56, 69, 78: MOS:Caps

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:09, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 50: Link Metacritic

The "cite Metacritic" template isn't linking it. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:06, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

I would change the order of the refs, so it's [9][24]

Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:15, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Outcome

On hold Great article, a few minor things but nothing that would take days to fix, I'll grant you 7 days.--Lirim | Talk 12:42, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lirim.Z: I have responded / addressed all of your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:42, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The picture under Filming and design still needs an alt description.--Lirim | Talk 14:51, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lirim.Z: I added the "alt" parameter and a description. Does it not appear? Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:57, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed it. Happy to pass this article now. — Lirim | Talk 15:06, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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