Talk:John F. Quirk/GA1
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Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 22:24, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Happy to review this - if you have time and interest I could use a review for either of my college presidents GANs here or here. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:24, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
- Is there any information regarding his selection/election to the presidency?
- None that I am able to find. Ergo Sum 01:34, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
- Are the Loyola presidency and the St. Ignatius pastorate necessarily held by the same person? If not, how long after he became president did he take up the pastorate? If so, say that explicitly.
- At that time, yes. I don't find a source that explicitly says that, but that was definitely the case with all of the early presidents/pastors. Ergo Sum 01:34, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
- "succeeding William P. Brett" → can shorten to "Brett" since his full name is given in the previous sentence
- "He presided over the..." → "Quirk presided" since "he" could refer to Gibbons.
- "Quirk's tenure as presidency" → "as president"
- "Georgetown University for one year, and then was appointed" → remove comma
- "for one year, and was a confessor at the" → remove comma
That's all I have upon first reading, well done. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 21:02, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I've addressed all of the above. Please let me know if you find anything else. Ergo Sum 01:37, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.