Talk:John W. Henry/Archives/2016

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Journalistic Tone

" On November 9, 2012, John W. Henry & Co., the financial trading firm owned by the Red Sox owner, informed clients it would stop managing their assets on December 31, 2012." This sentence seems abruptly out of place, especially in its reference to the Red Sox insofar as the baseball section follows this section, and appears to be a verbatim quote from some newspaper. "In the pre-dawn hours of ..." Are we writing a magazine or an encyclopedia? Orthotox (talk) 19:04, 24 January 2016 (UTC)

Assessment comment

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Try to expand lead per WP:LEAD, also watch out for WP:WEASEL and WP:PEACOCK and some unsourced statements about his personality. plange 23:05, 11 August 2006 (UTC)

Last edited at 23:05, 11 August 2006 (UTC). Substituted at 20:23, 29 April 2016 (UTC)